Deep Gloss Auto Salon- That's a good point. If I were paying somebody to do my vehicles, I'd sure want the roofs of the dog-haulers done as well as the hood of the best garage-queen.
ADetailedFinish- If you want to attract "higher end" clientele, consider that many of them will be highly educated and quite sensitive to how you communicate; you want them to think you're the sharpest tool in that particular shed and/or make your website look professionally done. Here are some changes I'd make:
Under “Washing”:
-you should change the “we use one buck” to “we use one bucket”
-change “piece of mind” to “peace of mind”.
Under “Clay Bar”:
-change “paints surface” to “paint’s surface”
-change “we than start” to “we then start”.
Under “Paint Corrections”:
-what glaze are you using under a sealant?
-I’d reword that “allow paint correction details to last a day or two”. While I can figure out what you mean (“it might take a day or two to do the work), it’s not clearly worded and would make many people wonder.
-change “paint correcting” to “paint correction”.
Under “What We Do”:
-reword that “we work on a number of high end vehicles and even your daily driven vehicle. It's not clearly expressed and might make it sound condescending towards daily drivers.
Under “Why Choose Us”:
-when you say you do “every square inch” of a vehicle, somebody like me would assume that includes the undercarriage and other areas you might not be thinking of.
Prices:
-high end vehicles shouldn’t cost more than less expensive ones.
-saying an exterior detail costs one price, and/but that paint correction is billed by the hour, is confusing
-change “customers” to “customer’s”
-consider changing “many prices” to “many packages”.
General:
-I find all the explanation marks to be a real turn-off
-As noted, only show pics of vehicles you’ve actually done yourself.
