First Biz card attempt

[Erock]

I think its got too much color going on. Once it is sized down you lose detail and it becomes too busy. Try a black background with tha car a bit smaller, maybe even tranparent or ghosted in the background, then bright letters that have a cleaner font and dont cover the car in anyway. Just my opinion. Good luck.



second one looks great

 

[YNOT]

I like this iteration much better.

Admit it...you only like this one better because it's got a Mustang on it. hehe.

Coming from a professional graphic designer, this latest one is certainly better than your first attempt which was way too busy and cluttered. Be sure to keep your type far enough away from the edges or it'll get cut off. 1/8" or more is a safe bet.

 

[Addicted2Bling]

Yeah that creepy letter thing you had going has got to go. I agree with the guy that said get UV coating, cause it reminds me of a freshly waxed car

 

[Bodezafa]

Latest version

 

[wallyStang]

I love the Mach 1!!!!! You should explain some of your services on the rear side of the card as well.

 

[DSPlati]

Thats more like it Nice and simple

 

[GearHead_1]

Best yet! Yeah it's probably the Mustang, YNOT.