New Business Logo ????

I have received thousands of buisness cards over the years and the third one ranks up there very high in all of those as far as classiness. It is the card I would go with for the clientel that you are after.
 
Thanks again guys.



I too believe in the 3rd one. I think some colours will have to be tweaked, as well as a change in font for the text below.



I hope that this logo and cards will attract the clients Im after. I was looking for a design that was boutique in nature. I wanted clients that are used to going to interior designers, high fashion lables, exclusive clubs, bars ext would think that they have seen it before because it reminds them of what they are used to.



I also though it should be as minimalist as possible, less is more kind of thing.



I will post the final proof when it is ready. Thanks again for all the feedback.



Regards

Tony.
 
Sounds like you're close to making a decision, but I can't help adding my vote. I found #2 more eye-catching, but #3 maybe more"elegant."



One thing I don't like about #2 and #3: you claim to restore. Having been involve in true auto restoration, I don't think "restore" is a term that most detailers could claim. Would "rejuvenate" be too pretentious? :nixweiss or maybe just "renew"?
 
Lynn,



I like the term 'restore', as opposed to the term 'restoration'. 'Restore' makes me think of someone bringing something back, like the gloss/shine on a paint job. When I hear 'restoration', I'm thinking frame-off, roti$$erie-type of work. But I do like 'renew' as well.



my .02



DavidM
 
ntwrkguy1, my opinion probably is not typical. I'm saddled with 3 cars from the '70s -- 2 restored, 1 needing restoration. To me, "restoration" is not something a detailer does; it's a mechanic/bodyshop/magician skill. But I bet that's not at all the perspective of the clients that most detailers are going for. So I'll sit down and shut up. :D
 
Lynn,



Don't sit down and shut up.....you've always got something good to add :) I agree, 'restoration' is definitely not something a detailer does. You have my sympathy -- 2 restored and 1 to go!! Keep up the good work, and the good posts!



-DavidM
 
Hi Guys these are the front and back of the new cards.

Front
3585prestige_shinebusiness_card_front-med.jpg




and Back

3585prestige_shinebusiness_card_back-med.jpg




I know that the white text on the back looks faint but when its on print it looks alot better.



Lynn - I know what you mean about restore. I chose to have that because I want clients to ask questions. The more I can get them talking the more chance I have of differenciating myself from the other monkeys that pass themselves off as detailers in my area.



Thanks to all for your contributions, they were all greatly appreciated.



Regards

Tony
 
*clap clap* all i can say is beautiful. One thing that i would do, is get it proof read by someone who is proficient (sp) in english, just in case they can word some stuff better, or notice any gramatical mistake that you can't see.



that is one thing that i can't stand, when some company tries to be professional, but then they have a spelling, or gramatical mistake.....not saying that you have any...but its always better to check.
 
Paint less should be one word, Paintless Dent Removal.



I would also put the phone number, email and website on the front of the card as well. You might want to proceed the email address with the word "e-mail:" and the website address with the word "website:" if you can fit it in. I would put the website address first.



Are you doing sewing repairs to seats?
 
Autoeng - I have a lot of PDR and Fabric, Vinyl work done by some excellant contractors. I find just adding this to a card or add will get some of those pre sale preparation clients, and give you money for a phone call.



I dont want to add the e for email sort of thing because these days its pretty well know, less is more.



I find having different services on your card gives the client more information which to ask more questions. Once you have a clients full attention it much easiers to inform them of your business services and hopefully close a sale. I have to be the sales, marketing, r&d, accounts and detailer all in one. Sometimes I dont get time to even do the detailing, the reason I started this in the first place.



Regards

Tony
 
Aw shucks. Thanks for the kind words. So I gotta come clean. In my history, I've been a professional editor and proofreader, and I've had a book of mine published. I'm an incorrigible editor/proofreader -- can't help myself. So ... now that Autoeng caught the one typo on your biz card ("paint less" > "paintless"), I gotta say, I'm impressed with the card. Like luke667 said, when a company tries to come off as professional but has errors on their card, it really turns me off. Yours is just classy!



Only one remaining question for me: is there really such a thing as a "certified, accredited technician" in detailing, or is that just marketing?
 
Lynn:



I have completed a couse in automotive detailing at a TAFE. In Australia this is the same place where Pannel Beaters, Spray Painters, Mechanics etc get their qualifications from. Unfortunately I learnt more what not to do from less than professional instructors.



I have also completed the Nationally recognised Meguair's Training Program and advanced certification. I have them both framed and can provided them to any client. I know it sounds a bit wierd to you, I an other from AUtopia, but I believe that I sets Prestige Shine apart from competition. The competition my area is car washes who offer detailing services that consist of Wool buffing pad with Malco Rejuvenator, or even Farecla G3 then a hand polish and sealant. For that they carge anywhere up to $250AUD. Most of my business comes from fixing these problems for unhappy customers.



I have corrected the "paintless" error, thanks for picking that up.
 
Wasn't meaning to jump on you about the "certified, accredited" comment, Mizzuri. I just did not know there were certification/accreditation programs for detailing. Just my ignorance.
 
Lynn

Your assumption is probably correct with the certifification being more marketing. I beleive you learn more acctually on the job, and asking questions to other professional and also here on Fourms.
 
Yeah, but in my field also there are accreditations and certifications. They're not really as valuable as on-the-job experience. But, despite the dubious value of those "credentials," an increasing number of our employers are requiring them in their job ads. So ... go with what sells. :up
 
Mizzuri said:
Hi Guys these are the front and back of the new cards.

Front
3585prestige_shinebusiness_card_front-med.jpg




and Back

3585prestige_shinebusiness_card_back-med.jpg




I know that the white text on the back looks faint but when its on print it looks alot better.



Lynn - I know what you mean about restore. I chose to have that because I want clients to ask questions. The more I can get them talking the more chance I have of differenciating myself from the other monkeys that pass themselves off as detailers in my area.



Thanks to all for your contributions, they were all greatly appreciated.



Regards

Tony



Excellent Choice. I liked #3 as well. To me, #2 reminded me of a detailing supply vendor in the States and that was a little too close to their logo.
 
I agree with Autoeng. I'd place your tele in the white space on the front of the card.



As you don't have an address on the card, are you planning to be a mobile detailer? If not, I'd include the address and potentially even a map on the card.



If you are a mobile, then I'd definitely highlight that on the card.



Nice format and look by the way. Very sharp.
 
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