Help making Postcards....

Tex Star Detail

Tex Star Detail

Formerly TexasTB
I am trying to word a post card to send to customers after they had a full detail. Basically, it would tell them about my maint. packages and buying carwashes by the week or month. I am having a hard time trying to word it corectly.....

I want a header like this.....

After your Detail........

then have a paragraph telling them about how I can keep the car
looking new with the packages I offer, Keep it protected. And so on
and so forth....

Then down here I will list my packages, the price, and the savings
from buying them individually..

Any help would be great. Not asking for a complete post cards. Just a few lines I should add and such

TIA
Chris
 
How about?

Thank You for being a valued customer at TexasTB Detailing
We at TexasTB detailing are here to help you maintain you Superior finish and would like to suggest some other options available here at TexasTB

After a complete detail
you can also purchase in advance or at the time of service, a continued service plan:
Wash exterior
Vacuum interior
wipe down plastic and leather
windows
dress tires and exterior
Fresh wax
For the price of $??.?? + Tax for any size car or truck. This would be a monthly service to be followed up with a complete detail every six months.

Complete exterior detail.
Removal of bugs and tar. Hand wash of exterior with steam cleaning of engine and wheel wells. Cleaning of door jams. Hand finished with a glossy coat of hard shell wax. *All prices are subject to local sales tax for the area of service*

Complete interior detail.
Includes steam cleaning of seats and carpet, stain removal, restoring leather/vinyl (including dash and door panels), washing windows and door jams. Enjoy that new car feel again! *All prices are subject to local sales tax for the area of service*


Well just a shot anyway.
 
postcardplan.jpg


The writing is more crisp when printed. I printed on photo paper. VERY professional looking. These will be left in the cars that I detail. Though, I will also tell them about the 'Plans'. Nothing too fancy. Just something to get the point across.
 
the font does not show up well in the post, but will let other critique that part... it just might be my OLD eyes.... had to say that before Norah...lol.

Look real good.. i like it.

does this mean because I help you out I get a free detail?
(your response here) it better be yes!!!!!!!
Great because I live in NJ.... lets see I have an opening soon...... you can do it next monday... ...I'll pick you up at the bus station....lol
 
Beercan31 said:
the font does not show up well in the post, but will let other critique that part... it just might be my OLD eyes.... had to say that before Norah...lol.

Look real good.. i like it.

does this mean because I help you out I get a free detail?
(your response here) it better be yes!!!!!!!
Great because I live in NJ.... lets see I have an opening soon...... you can do it next monday... ...I'll pick you up at the bus station....lol
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Yea....it is hard to read in the post, but looks great printed.

On that detail....let me check my schedule...LOL
 
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