Flyer and Newspaper ad, need opinions

Shaun Carollo

Shaun Carollo

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Here is my Newspaper Ad and Flyer . What do you guys think? I used Photoshop CS and for a first time use, I think it turned out pretty well.


I was originally only going to use the black and white for the flyer but now I'm thinking about using the newspaper ad for that. Do you think the better design will justify spending a lot more money on flyers?

Also, I'm not sure about the Porsche picture, I copied it from their website, under the wallpapers section assuming that it is royalty free, is this true?

Thanks,
Shaun
 
Thanks Shaun. It looks great . The colors are appealing and eye catching. Looks real professional for a flyer. I better update my own know..LOL
 
Shaun.
Under what section you going to list your business. Also do you know what is the cost to run this kind of ad, is it just regular weekly paper. BTW the newpaper ad looks very good, professional.
Thanks for sharing Ideas.
 
Looks good, but, you priced the executive at $100 and the other two details at $50 ea. In my opinion you should offer a small discount price if they buy the executive, like $ 90 or something like that. I know you have the $20 off but a repeat customer cant use that. The $10 savings could offer an incentive for them to buy the executive (2 packages)rather than just one of your packages.
Food for thought. Good work!
 
Also there is an extra S in the "exterior" detail wording of particles
And make your Phone # BIGGER if thats how you want them to contact you. Its a little small.! Good luck
 
Shaun Carollo said:
... Do you think the better design will justify spending a lot more money on flyers?

Also, I'm not sure about the Porsche picture, I copied it from their website, under the wallpapers section assuming that it is royalty free, is this true?

Thanks,
Shaun
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Great flyer :bigups. Yes, spend the extra $$$. The colors are very nice. Only thing you might want to consider is moving the $25 wash info to the right and adjusting the Porsche as a result. The reader's eye will naturally follow your interior detail text-block to the right... and possibly right off the page. Putting the $25 wash in that natural line-of-sight might give you better overall results.

As for the Porsche, its safe to assume that anything on a manufacter's website is in some way legally protected. They won't come after you for royalties (that would be for the photographer), but can punish you for using protected material for profit. If you can Photoshop a safer pic it might not be a bad idea... or at least edit-out the plate info so the pic isn't so easily identified. :naughty
 
your interior cleaning prices dont match. one says $60 and the other says $50. other than that, i think it looks pretty good.
 
They look pretty good to me. The only things I see are;

1. Your pricing of the executive detail should include an incentive. After all, you want people to buy this service and not just an exterior detail. So if you offer a discount for purchasing that particular package, more people will see it as a value.

2. Your business name and your contact info should be more prominent. That is the info you want people to see and remember. So make it red, or make it larger!

SC~
 
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