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Hey i need you guys to help me decide if its good or not.....does it need work? hows navigation? any things i wrote that dont make sense? wrong detail terms? anything i just want to have a great website that works before i start advertising it.......



thank you



Welcome
 
you know what sucks



i just went to check out my page, and the under the services, when i did it. I didnt save the exterior services, it took me like 2 hours:work: now im.....:mad:
 
Needs some color it's to bland looking . Some type of picture on the home page would be nice to jazz it up . Your tag line " We Make You And Your Car Stand Out From The Rest" is to small it makes it hard to read .
 
I too agree on the color and also have a hard time reading center justified text. I've always preferred to read left justified or full block.
 
G00dy03 said:
You have some spelling/grammar issues in the FAQ section.
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As well as the Survey section. Capitalize "i" in:

"I enjoy a service that goes an extra mile to assure i am happy."



And the "p" at the beginning of this sentence:

"paying attention to the smallest details is a good thing."



That last one is kinda ironic.....lmao...



Change up some colors, add some pics......:xyxthumbs



Edit....Under the appointment tab, you have this....



"If you would like to have your vehicle back to its lustrous shine give us a call to make an appointment. "



After shine, put a comma.
 
IMHO i would not bash products like turtle wax when you say you use "grade A products"...you may offend or alienate potential customers that love turtle wax, etc. i'd stick with stating you use high quality or market leading products and leave it at that.



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Hey guys thank you all for your advice, i have change many things and made it look more professional and i havent added pictures it still has lots of work plus i need to add the exterior services, before and afters then ill be good to go.......



check it out....



if it looks the same you have empty your coockies and empty the cache......



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If you need electricity and water, I am not sure how you are going about removing odors and shampooing. Do you have an ozone machine, fogger, or steamer? Do you have an extractor? I like the site- simple and clean.

If you want to do this full time in San Fernando you will have to adapt to the water reclaim enforcement at some point. I know that Jose at Superior does this and does very well. It's hard to make money by being under equipment(ized). Perhaps you are just starting and don't have the financial resources to purchase such equipment- many detailers started this way. However, make sure you have a plan to reinvest so that you can get the needed equipment.



Rob
 
WCD said:
If you need electricity and water, I am not sure how you are going about removing odors and shampooing. Do you have an ozone machine, fogger, or steamer? Do you have an extractor? I like the site- simple and clean.

If you want to do this full time in San Fernando you will have to adapt to the water reclaim enforcement at some point. I know that Jose at Superior does this and does very well. It's hard to make money by being under equipment(ized). Perhaps you are just starting and don't have the financial resources to purchase such equipment- many detailers started this way. However, make sure you have a plan to reinvest so that you can get the needed equipment.



Rob
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Well i have just a shampoo...and odor eliminator chemical......a vacuum that extracts water.....yes i know at some point.....i dont think i will be under equipment, i have the PC the Hitachi and a vacuum.....chemcials towels well everything to start out...... but not an ozone or a heat extractor..... yes i will be reinvesting 75% back into the business from the money i earn.....
 
 
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That's an article I wrote for PC and D that you might find interesting on odor removal. Make sure when shampooing that you do not over saturate the area. An extractor will do wonders over a vacuum for removing water and soil from the fibers of the carpet..not to mention the solution. There are some smaller units for mobile detailers that are more affordable these days.



Good luck, Rob



Also, insurance is something you should have.
 
WCD said:
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That's an article I wrote for PC and D that you might find interesting on odor removal. Make sure when shampooing that you do not over saturate the area. An extractor will do wonders over a vacuum for removing water and soil from the fibers of the carpet..not to mention the solution. There are some smaller units for mobile detailers that are more affordable these days.



Good luck, Rob



Also, insurance is something you should have.
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thanks for the link....it was a good read that reasurred what i already know.....
 
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