Envious Eric
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agreed with the writing and the punctuation as it seems like you didnt use any at all in your post and it made it hard to read without stoping to comprehend what you were saying throughout the whole post while reading it to myself looking at the pictures and reading at the same time
Read that and it's hard to read without the proper punctuation.
here is how something like above SHOULD read:
Agreed! Between the writing and the punctuation in your post, which it doesn't seem like you used any at all, it was hard to read without having to stop to comprehend what you are trying to say. (delete the rest)
punctuation and grammar matter just as much as material...
oh, and on the detail, I envy the cars you get to work on! I had a chance to work on a Ferrari, but I hardly knew the guy (just moved next door to him) so he took it to a detail shop in LA. Needless to say, I would have given it a proper detail compared to this shop...
Read that and it's hard to read without the proper punctuation.
here is how something like above SHOULD read:
Agreed! Between the writing and the punctuation in your post, which it doesn't seem like you used any at all, it was hard to read without having to stop to comprehend what you are trying to say. (delete the rest)
punctuation and grammar matter just as much as material...
oh, and on the detail, I envy the cars you get to work on! I had a chance to work on a Ferrari, but I hardly knew the guy (just moved next door to him) so he took it to a detail shop in LA. Needless to say, I would have given it a proper detail compared to this shop...