Website is done

mohamedmaark said:
Hello guys, put some time in getting my website up, what do you guys think, feel free to say anything bad about it or anything that should be changed, appreciate the advice!

Dedicateddetailingnj.com
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Looks like a very professional site, and has lots of info. Good job in my opinion :rockon
 
Looks really good.

I would change one thing though

"
IMG_3497.jpg IMG_3632.jpg 1385577_604321176286513_449690590_n.jpg IMG_3840.jpg IMG_3761.jpg IMG_3555.jpg $140
$80
$30
$50
$75
$130
$100
$140
$300
$400
$280
$415
$615
$55
$30
*Prices may vary depending on the size and cleanliness of the vehicle."

I would change cleanliness to "condition"
 
Ronkh said:
Looks really good.

I would change one thing though

"
IMG_3497.jpg IMG_3632.jpg 1385577_604321176286513_449690590_n.jpg IMG_3840.jpg IMG_3761.jpg IMG_3555.jpg $140
$80
$30
$50
$75
$130
$100
$140
$300
$400
$280
$415
$615
$55
$30
*Prices may vary depending on the size and cleanliness of the vehicle."

I would change cleanliness to "condition"
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Will do thanks!
 
mohamedmaark said:
It might be because the photos are powered by flash player, so you might have to update the flash player... maybe, is it all of the pictures or just in the photos section?
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I realized this to be the issue as well. Flash is a great piece of software for the Windows world. That said, there are so many iPhone and iPad users these days, I'm not sure I wouldn't look at QuickTime or other multi-platform pic software. Most Windows users have it on their device along with iTunes. Might allow more eyes to view your site.

I say this as someone who pics up his iPad more than Windows laptop these days. I use both Safari and Chrome as browsers but also have purchased Puffin just to watch Flash. I visit a news site (KSL.com) that I quite like a couple of times each day, they post many of their lead stories in video format. 75% of these videos are Flash videos. I don't even try to view them anymore. I can but it just isn't worth it.

There will no doubt be someone who's thinking, just use Puffin or other app that allows iDevice users to utilize Flash. I've tried this but software is far from ready for prime time. Hence my comment. Anyway... I digress. Your site is vey nice. AutopiaForums allows links to Detailers personal business sites, I made your link live.
 
GearHead_1 said:
I realized this to be the issue as well. Flash is a great piece of software for the Windows world. That said, there are so many iPhone and iPad users these days, I'm not sure I wouldn't look at QuickTime or other multi-platform pic software. Most Windows users have it on their device along with iTunes. Might allow more eyes to view your site.

I say this as someone who pics up his iPad more than Windows laptop these days. I use both Safari and Chrome as browsers but also have purchased Puffin just to watch Flash. I visit a news site (KSL.com) that I quite like a couple of times each day, they post many of their lead stories in video format. 75% of these videos are Flash videos. I don't even try to view them anymore. I can but it just isn't worth it.

There will no doubt be someone who's thinking, just use Puffin or other app that allows iDevice users to utilize Flash. I've tried this but software is far from ready for prime time. Hence my comment. Anyway... I digress. Your site is vey nice. AutopiaForums allows links to Detailers personal business sites, I made your link live.
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Thanks, now are you saying that i should change my photos and try to use something other than flash player? I think i could do so, and you do have a point, im sure there are alot of apple users out there. Also another question, do you know how you could click on someone's name in a post and then you could press "visit who evers homepage" and then it takes them to your website, how can i do that?
 
Yes, that is what I was suggesting. You can click on a members name and visit their profile page. If they've listed their own personal home page you can go to it from there. Many also put a link on their signature line that will take you to their own personal detailing site.
 
I'm assuming you're using WordPress.

Find out where in WP you would make the page titles that appear in a users browser say something (rather than 'Home') like 'Dedicated Detail of New Jersey'. Same for Photos; something like Photos of Dedicated Detailing of New Jersey, or something.

Also, name your images. Rather than IMG_3497.jpg. Use, 2016_ Pontiac_Seville :-)

SEO. Google likes it.
 
LeMarque said:
I'm assuming you're using WordPress.

Find out where in WP you would make the page titles that appear in a users browser say something (rather than 'Home') like 'Dedicated Detail of New Jersey'. Same for Photos; something like Photos of Dedicated Detailing of New Jersey, or something.

Also, name your images. Rather than IMG_3497.jpg. Use, 2016_ Pontiac_Seville :-)

SEO. Google likes it.
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Ok will do thanks!
 
Looks nice. Only thing I see is in the Minor Paint Correction section you have the sentence.

Single stage polishing is performed removing approximately %50 of paint defects.

Just a typo. No biggie.
 
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