"poster" first draft

for the full detail, you could maybe move the part about "for fairly clean cars" to the top to define the full detail.
 
Maybe use a pic of a car in full snow foam as one of your four pictures (I'm sure a lot of people won't know what that means...they might get it if they see a car in the pics covered in foam).

Go get 'em!
 
In maintenance wash,

you use the phrases "detailed hand wash" and "detailed safe wash". Maybe words like meticulous helps.

The purpose of the air dry really is probably a touchless dry process so I would emphasize that rather than air dry.
 
My opinion only.....

THe Full recondition should be by quote instead of pricing it. $450.00 may turn people off till you can talk to them and let them know whats involved etc.
 
To make things less confusing to the customer I would put under 'Full Detail', "Includes everything in the Maintenance Detail Plus this, this and this" and then put your Clay bar and sealant. Same for the 'Total Reconditioning Package', put 'Includes everything in the Full Detail Package Plus;' this way they know exactly what they are getting and why they are paying more.
 
I don't see windows mentioned anywhere. You know you do them but a potential customer won't unless you tell them.......interior & exterior.
 


here`s the second draft to me all they have to change is instead of total reconditioning i told them to put extra/add on services and on the bottom where it states icar certified i told them to put i-car trained/certified and also licensed and fully insured ! other than what i want to change do you guys have any ideas or is this pretty much a go to print after the changes i mentioned
 
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