New Detailing Website!..SW Washington

NWClassicDetail

NWClassicDetail

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Heads up!
Just finished up my website for my New Detailing Business
Check it Out at "Northwestpolish.com"
If you have any insight or suggestions feel free to let me know
enjoy.:bigups
 
Looks great man! I actually just finished mine to, but taking its sweet time to go through the 24-48hr DNS process or whatever. Coming Soon - Future home of something quite cool

No matter what people may say, you've put effort into a website and that'll bring business regardless. Its more than a lot of so called "professional detailers" have done so you'll stand out. Good luck to yah bud :)
 
I think your service descriptions are a bit long winded (could be condensed a bit), and there should be one page with the service descriptions and prices together. also, stick with always a verb or noun to start

example:

vacuum floors
clean door jambs

or

floors vacuumed
door jambs cleaned


I like that you indicate your mobile as well as mention the areas you service right at the top of the home page

show your face somewhere. helps to build trust

and make your web address part of your signature here so people can check it out in the future after you comment on something
 
Change your copyright date to the current year. As time rolls on, it will make it seem as if you have been in business longer. Long roots help to insure trust. I might even be tempted to pull out the part about when you opened shop. There are other ways to say that you're the new guy in town and worth a look.
 
Well you asked us for our thoughts so I'm going to give it to you. There is no gallery, how do we know you didn't just learn how to detail yesterday? Take some pictures, show your work, even if it's your own car. Your prices are outrageous, I don't know what city you live in, but if someone around here was to charge $100 for an exterior detail they would be laughed at. You tell us in one of your service packages that you quickly vacuum floors, quickly vacuum mats, quickly vacuum seats. I for one, do not like someone doing a "quick" job on anything. I want someone that does a good job, even if they are slow, and especially since you are charging $100 for an interior detail. Another thing, all that vacuuming of the floors mats and seats, that's all expected when you vacuum. You could say something like "thorough vacuum." Other than that, website looks halfway decent. Not trying to bring you down or anything but some things on there could use a little attention. I've redone my own website 4 times already and I am still finding things I could change. Good luck:bigups
 
Agree with the long winded readings of what your different packages are. Also that word "Quick" stuck out to me big time. Also how are you doing your SEO Tags on page? Looks really good though!
 
Thanks you guys for the insight, its really helpful, ill get to changing what you guys insisted, its seems like really good advice.
This is just my first time and first attempt at it, so i definitely needed something different just didnt know what it was.
 
Addicted2Bling said:
Well you asked us for our thoughts so I'm going to give it to you. There is no gallery, how do we know you didn't just learn how to detail yesterday? Take some pictures, show your work, even if it's your own car. Your prices are outrageous, I don't know what city you live in, but if someone around here was to charge $100 for an exterior detail they would be laughed at. You tell us in one of your service packages that you quickly vacuum floors, quickly vacuum mats, quickly vacuum seats. I for one, do not like someone doing a "quick" job on anything. I want someone that does a good job, even if they are slow, and especially since you are charging $100 for an interior detail. Another thing, all that vacuuming of the floors mats and seats, that's all expected when you vacuum. You could say something like "thorough vacuum." Other than that, website looks halfway decent. Not trying to bring you down or anything but some things on there could use a little attention. I've redone my own website 4 times already and I am still finding things I could change. Good luck:bigups
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Thanks man, the insight was very helpful. This is actually my first attempt at it, so i appreciate the advice.
I understand the quickness part i do need to change that, but my description doesnt show what my work does...Granted the price may seem a little high, but the quality of work is even higher.
I guess i do need to change the quick part of it and specify with a little less detail.
But definitely helpful man, im sure ill have to do the same as you.lol

:bigups
 
Jsmooth said:
Agree with the long winded readings of what your different packages are. Also that word "Quick" stuck out to me big time. Also how are you doing your SEO Tags on page? Looks really good though!
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Thanks man, good to keep gettin advice.
And i built my website through vistaprint.com so they offer the option to do that.
 
^^Well if you can get away with charging $100 then go for it. I could never do that around here because I know most other detailers in the area charge a lot less. One of the biggest things in business is the way you present your business. And when you have a bunch of little flaws on your website, what do you think a customers first impression is going to be??? I'm just telling you this to help you out. Lets say I had a booger on my nose, I would want you to tell me about it so I don't look like an idiot in front of everyone right?

Well my friend, there's a booger on your nose;)
 
Another booger...... "You're #1 Mobile Detailing Service" right on the front page.
It should be Your, what you have is an abbreviation for You are.

Some suggestions:

“As owner of NWC Detail I will provide the best quality service while saving you time and money. There are low quality detail shops in abundance and that is not my goal. If you seek a top quality mobile service at a reasonable price then look no further.


My focus is providing high-quality service and complete customer satisfaction. Exceeding your expectations is the norm. Please call ###-###-#### for an appointment or with any questions.

I STRONGLY suggest you get together with someone good with grammar and spelling to go over everything word by word. Not being a bonehead but if I came across your site in its present form I would be gone in ten seconds flat never giving you a chance.
 
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