Need opinions on advertisments

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jahazii

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what yall think?





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What are we looking at and where will it be used?



I like the logo at the bottom of the second piece. Try and be as consistent as you can and use it (if you so choose) in every piece of marketing you put out.
 
Loose the side name and the repete of your tag line . Those [ ] either need to line up or go it looks to cluttered . The logo on the second page looks much better , try using that on the card . Like Michael suggested be consistent with your logo and business name . Stick with one Font , two tops .
 
It looks a bit busy to me. I would remove the J&B tag on the far left and also the notation on the bottom about before/after pics. I would also either switch where the logo and the corcle are or ditch the circle and just move the logo over to be above "the finishing touch". As it is your eyes have to jump around a bit to catch everything, it's easier to get your point across when there is a "flow" to your information. Also think about color scheme and consistency again.



Overall they look very well done and professional. What program are you using to make these and where will you have them printed (at home, internet or printers)?
 
MichaelM said:
It looks a bit busy to me. I would remove the J&B tag on the far left and also the notation on the bottom about before/after pics. I would also either switch where the logo and the corcle are or ditch the circle and just move the logo over to be above "the finishing touch". As it is your eyes have to jump around a bit to catch everything, it's easier to get your point across when there is a "flow" to your information. Also think about color scheme and consistency again.



Overall they look very well done and professional. What program are you using to make these and where will you have them printed (at home, internet or printers)?
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Ditto . Don't be affraid to make your business name larger . Are these one sided cards ?
 
From an amature's standpoint, the only thing I don't like is that the eye is drawn to "the finishing touch", while it takes a second of searching for the eye to find the logo/business name. I love the eye-candyness of it though. I think the colors are a win!



edit: I see you edited the last image out. I do like that big one that's posted above. :)
 
latenightprinters.com



5,000 full color tri-fold brochures with UV coating - $800

5,000 full color 2-sided business cards with coating- $200



They had great pricing for smaller quantities as well and they will even do the design work for free.



I've also heard vistaprint.com was good. Can't comment on them though as I've only tried latenightprinters and was extremely happy with their services. Good Luck.



Matt Williams

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