my tri fold brochure!

[dcswd]

Here is a brochure that ive been working on.





Those purple/blue lines are guides to show where the page folds, and they dont show up when its printed.

the first page (110kb)

the second page (127kb)



I made it in Microsoft Publisher, so if you have that and want to look at it there, this is the link:

right click and save as... (77.5kb)





I am looking for any comments and suggestions on this. Please tell me if I should change anything, or if I should re-design it or anything like that before I have it printed. If you think my prices should be changed a bit as well, please tell me.



I think Scottwax originally wrote part of the disclaimer that I used. It was posted somewhere on Autopia. I thought it would be okay to use, but if you dont want me to, i'll remove it or change it significanly.





Thanks in advance

 

[zzyyzx]

Not bad... I'd just change the word oversized to large. Oversized makes me think of a Ford F-650 or something like that, whereas I think you'd probably want the oversized pricing for anything much larger than an Expedition.



Also, in the paint care section, I'd probably up the prices a few bucks and just do the clay. If you're giving them that level of work, don't give them the option to be cheap and not do something that should probably be done. Allow a return customer a discount if the claying isn't needed.



If you're planning on paying to print in color, I'd add a little more since the cost will already be incurred. Looks good and I look forward to seeing the finished product.