Here is a mock up for my logo I'm having my designer work on, could you guys give me your advice? input? I like the font and was wondering if It would look better with the name straight across and something in the back? let me know, I would appreciate your honest suggestions.
My logo mock up, your input?
- Thread starter jose206
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I personally think its a little busy
Maybe make the P S and C much more dominant. Let the rest of the text be much smaller. Screw the wheel, or make it more prominent.
You want Simple and Memorable. Busy is uh.. not so effective.
I don't mean this to be harsh friend - just trying to help
Maybe make the P S and C much more dominant. Let the rest of the text be much smaller. Screw the wheel, or make it more prominent.
You want Simple and Memorable. Busy is uh.. not so effective.
I don't mean this to be harsh friend - just trying to help
imported_Jakerooni
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just remember the rules of logo's
clear
effective
looks great in both color and black and white
is easily transferable to multi-mediums
I don't think that logo really follows the rules effectively. your design guy really should've known that and told you. I think it would look decent on a business card. but trying to make it into letterhead or embriodered on a shirt i don't think it will look good. just my $.02
clear
effective
looks great in both color and black and white
is easily transferable to multi-mediums
I don't think that logo really follows the rules effectively. your design guy really should've known that and told you. I think it would look decent on a business card. but trying to make it into letterhead or embriodered on a shirt i don't think it will look good. just my $.02
Jakerooni said:
Jake speaks the truth, and this info should be cross posted to every 'Check out my new logo/website/business card!11' thread. If it isn't presentable in black and white, start over.
You want to create some continuity across business cards, uniforms, envelopes, vehicle signage, websites, etc- and alot of the designs posted will lose any positive attributes doing so. Check out logofaves.com, logopond.com, etc.
Envious Eric
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too hard to read as well, choose a different font!
imported_Jakerooni
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that looks a lot better
thedetailer
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the second one looks much better!
gone postal
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I liked the plain black the best until you just posted the yellow w/ blue background version. It looks good and would make for a nice business card, but the rest of your info (name, #, etc) would get lost in the blue swirly things - unless you have the background's opacity toned down.
The whole "enchilada" though won't transfer easily to letterhead & invoices though - you'd obviously just use the main logo - in which case I wouldn't recommend yellow (do black) or the "chrome" look - too cheasy (but strangely works in yellow)
The whole "enchilada" though won't transfer easily to letterhead & invoices though - you'd obviously just use the main logo - in which case I wouldn't recommend yellow (do black) or the "chrome" look - too cheasy (but strangely works in yellow)