Hey, I need feed back on Business card!

[AZ Ferrari Man]

Hey guys, I just made these on gotprint.com wow what a website! I need some feedback on the designs, I like both but cant decide, and any suggestions on how to enhance them would be nice!

Andrew

 

[Woob]

Weird first person to go with the Carrera. Does your email address really start with a capital D? I would add a some more graphics to the card since its so blue and white.

 

[The Chee]

I like this one best but you need to remove the dotted lines around the pic, it makes it look ugly.Hmmm the font too, something is not right, not sure if it's the colour

 

[SVR]

card

Much prefer the second card.
Has a more professional look to it IMO

 

[Bob]

I like the second car but like the first cards layout better. I say you should use a shiny a$$ black or dark colored car though. Just my opinion.

 

[JimS]

Your slogan could be "Your car will stand out like a Diamond in a goat's ass"....my alltime favorite "line"!!

 

[kimwallace]

But ... Does he really want customers that go around looking for diamonds in a goat's ass? :lmfao

 

[JaredPointer]

Are the dotted lines some sort of editing tool? If they are just part of the design, I'd say get rid of them. It will look much cleaner without those dotted lines.

 

[kycivicboy]

yeah i was on the website he made them on. It is just for editing the text. it will not be on the finished cards.

 

[Jaguar]

I kinda like the first one better.

 

[AZ Ferrari Man]

OK how bout this one

Hey, the lines are an editing tool. I used a shiny a** black car on this one check it out!

 

[JaredPointer]

I already voted. I think that card is a step in the right direction though. The paint on that car looks a lot better to me.

 

[Exquisite]

I personally like the shiny black Mercedes card.

 

[rollman]

I like the third one :bigups Thats one of the best web sites for making cards up . Its easy to change text , photos , set up , colors and so on. Makes parting together your own business cards a snap .

BTW . try another color on the lower text . Its kinda hard on the eyes,at least it is on mine but I'm old :lmfao

 

[jaybs02]

I like the third one :bigups
BTW . try another color on the lower text . Its kinda hard on the eyes,at least it is on mine but I'm old :lmfao

:yeah

 

[Thomas Dekany]

I like the 2nd card.

If you are mobile, you should put that on there.

 

[BookemDano]

Try for reflections in the paint

Hey, the lines are an editing tool. I used a shiny a** black car on this one check it out!

I like this one, but you might want to consider retaking the pic. The overall composition is great, but IMO it should include more reflections in the paint to better show the shiny paintwork.

Try this... Take your camera and take a pic of a freshly waxed hood. Now move the camera so that the hood has reflections of clouds, trees, houses, whatever. Look better?

I'd like to say that I've known this for years, but I learned it just last week. :LOLOL

Regards,

Dan.

 

[AZ Ferrari Man]

Well, I got the backround from gotprint.com but when I become more established I would go for a personal pic of a hood etc...

 

[ron`s]

Go with the Benz.

 

[The Chee]

The 3rd pic doesn't show much shine, more like a matte look :dunno