HELP! I need words!

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samiam513

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I need to figure out what to say on the sign I will be putting at car shows. I need som help!



So far I have this..



Perfect Reflections Auto detailing

Full interior and exterior detailing services.

I only use the best such as 3m Meguiars p21s Einszett Zaino Klasse Blackfire Souveran

(xxx)xxx-xxxx



Need more words. Any ideas?
 
This is just my opinion, but the word "best" denotes only one thing in my mind. Not many things. I would leave that part out of the products list. Maybe you could say "I use only top end products such as...". I think that would get the same thing across. That's just an idea though.



How large of a sign is it going to be? Are you limited to the four lines or can it be more?





Perfect Reflections Auto detailing

Full interior and exterior detailing services.

Using only top end and high quality products such as

3m Meguiars p21s Einszett Zaino Klasse Blackfire Souveran

(xxx)xxx-xxxx
 
What about switching the wording on the products you say you use to something like, "I only use the finest products and materials available so your car will have those Perfect Reflections.". This way if you switch products in the future you won't have to change your sign. Also you won't get asked questions like, "Which 3M stuff do you use?" or "I hate Meguiar's stuff, don't use any of it on my car."
 
Watch what you put in caps and puncuation. Using some periods, no commas, etc. etc.......



I can't spell or use proper puncuation either so my wife gets to proof everything important. She's a journalism major and makes my writin' spokin' life hell!!! But she buys me Klasse/Blackfire so I can't complain!





Anyway, have it checked.............:nixweiss
 
Less is more with signs, people want to walk and read. They are not going to stop and read the sign unless they are really looking for you.



Here is what i have



NEW YORK'S PERFECT DETAILING

"AutoMotive Appearance specialists"

 Hand Washing

 Compounding

 Polishing

 Waxing

 Interior Shampoo

 Leather Cleaned & Conditioned

Plus much more, just ask us about your car!
 
NY detailer said:
Less is more with signs, people want to walk and read. They are not going to stop and read the sign unless they are really looking for you.
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I agree with NYD. Less is more. Spark their curiosity. Make it so that customers want to stop and ask you questions.

Maybe something like:



PERFECT REFLECTIONS DETAILING

Full Service Interior and Exterior Detailing Avaliable

Only Top End and High Quality Products Used

(XXX)XXX-XXXX



Don't list the products. That way, customers will/may inquire as to what products you use. Once you get your foot in the door, it's up to you to sell yourself. Just my .02.:cool:
 
Why not just take the whole product thing out and replace it with something else? Maybe it is just me but I think it is kind of tacky to say like 'I only use the best' or something similar.



I like the way NYD has his sign. Easy to read and simple.



Remember KISS = Keep It Simple Stupid
 
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