Critique my Flyer/business card...please

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hey guys... getting ready to start the business! I feel i need to do some price adjustments, and need to say something about referrals in the flyer.:help: let me know what you think.



Business card(top is front, bottom - rear)

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can anyone tell me how to post a document from wordperfect?:nixweiss its saved as a .wpd and its bieng a hassle. here it is copied and pasted:



"Absolute Detail

An Absolutely Beautiful Finish!

Matt Omura (630)-362-xxxx

myemail@comcast.net



Spring and Summer are Just Around The Corner...

Now is a good time to get your vehicle looking its best!



The harsh winter months can take a toll on your car. Salt, dirt, bird droppings, bug splatter, acid rain, industrial fallout, hard water, improper washing, oxidation and time leave your car’s paint feeling rough, looking dull, and full of minute scratches. The solution? Machine correction with a random orbital polisher. The process removes microns of clear coat, and it’s virtually impossible to “burn� through the paint.



Prices:

Service Small Car/ 2 Door 4 Door Car/Lt. Truck Minivan/SUV/Lrg. Truck

Gold Package (Recommended every 1-2 weeks)

Wash and dry with microfiber products, clean door jambs, dress tires and trim, vacuum interior, clean dashboard, clean interior glass.

$30

$40

$50

Platinum Package (Recommended every 3-6 months)

Gold package + clean and dress dashboard, clay bar and your choice of either paint sealant or carnauba wax ($15 per extra layer).

$50 $60 $70

Absolute Package (Recommended once a year)

The works! Includes wash, remove bugs and tar, clay bar, compound(as needed), polish, seal and wax paint. Dress tires and trim, vacuum & carpet shampoo, clean and dress all interior leather, plastic and vinyl. Clean door jambs and all glass.

$225

$245

$265

Exterior Only (For swirled, oxidized, dull paint)

Complete exterior detail. Wash, remove bugs and tar, clay bar, compound(as needed), polish, seal and wax paint. Dress tires and exterior vinyl. $125 $135 $145

Interior Only (For soiled, stained interiors)

Vacuum and shampoo carpets and seats, clean and dress all leather, plastic and vinyl. Clean glass. $110 $120 $135



Prices subject to change according to size and condition of vehicle. "
 

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Love the card. Your prices seem to be around what I plan on charging.



In response to putting something for referrals on the flyer. Possibly put it on the back and that will serve as your "referral card." Or interject something small at the bottom of the flyer stating your referral deal.
 
thanks for the feedback

i was concerned about my price jump from platinum to absolute detail - $50 to 225. im worried that people will sway away from the absolute package - thinking its not worth it.

p.s. sry- i know its hard to read!
 
Now that I look over it again. I think offering clay bar+wax is a little low. Maybe just have the clay for the next step up.
 
For your "Gold Package", I would up the price to around $100 starting price for a regular sedans. I have the same type of service package ("Mainenance Detail"), and the only thing I do different is I add on a "spot" shampoo for their carpet mats.
 
lecchilo - lol i did that in paint cause youre not supposed to "spam" your business, and i dont want any of you jamokes calling me! haha.



kleraudio - overnightprints.com i just looked at some of thier backgrounds, picked two that i thought would work and put my stuff on there. think: who, what, where, why
 
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lecchilo - lol i did that in paint cause youre not supposed to "spam" your business, and i dont want any of you jamokes calling me! haha.



haha i know i know i was just being stupid... good looking card as i said before
 
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