critique my brochure!

[boostdfd3s]

hey every1,

I'm 16 and been detailin for 3 years as a way to make some extra money over the summer and love the job as well. I decided to re-vamp my brochure this year and make it more professional. Let me know what you think :xyxthumbs I made it in 98 Publisher as a tri-fold, so thats how the pics will show up, as page one and two like Pub shows it.



-Zach



page 1

page 2

 

[boostdfd3s]

sorry for the big pics!

 

[2k2blackWRX]

HOLY CHEAP PRICES!!



100 bucks for a full detail, wow.



My shop starts at 129.99 for cars in pittsburgh and we are one of the cheapest places that do a complete detail in the area.

 

[boostdfd3s]

lol that cheap huh? I also live in a country club which equates to ppl with nice cars but TIGHT wallets, and there are plenty of turtle wax detailers around that charge $75 and most ppl dont care to know the difference. But u thought the brochure was good?

 

[Auto Care USA]

Way to much writing. Nobody will ever read all that. Not necessary to get into all that detail. Get to the point and give them a special offer.