Check out my website and please give me tips!

Looks good, I really like the name and logo and the simple format of the webpage is good. There are some random periods you used to format that could be removed, but no biggy - get the gallery up asap and maybe run it through a spell check, I saw some minor typos (waiver spelled "waver" , dying as "dieing" etc...) and there is some random capitalization.
 
<From answering the phone to the completion of work, we treat you and your vehicle with the utmost level of professionalism. We promise Top Notch Customer Service. You will not be disappointed. Thank you for choosing Reflection Perfection.>



This is just a quick rewrite-I'm not thrilled with it, but tried to clean it up a little. I think too much text deters the reader. Also, some of the text was a bit redundant and the sentences were the ol' run-ons.



Even at Back-To-School Night, I cut out lots of text because I know that parents will not read after a certain point. Try to keep it concise and point out a few biggies.



Good luck!

Rob
 
Personally, some of the service descriptions seem overly detailed. For instance



A one step Polish/Wax is applied to the finish by our Port Cable Dual Action Polisher. Eliminates minor scratches and swirls and adds 3 months of protection, clarity and depth to the finish.
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Could be changed to

A one step Polish/Wax is applied to the finish to eliminate minor scratches and swirls. Adds 3 months of protection, clarity and depth to the finish.
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Or something to that effect; I just don't see the customer really caring what particular tools you use.



It really seems like a lot of references to specific products and tools. This one got me, too:

Next we use our Porter Cable Dual Action Polisher with the proper pad and product to polish the finish to a great shine while removing light scratches, light swirls marks and light surface imperfections.
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The emphasis seems to be on the products you're using, not the end results.



JMHO
 
"The perfect reflection

...one vehicle at a time"



At Reflection Perfection we offer mobile car washing and detailing at your home or office. For your convenience the entire detail shop is brought to your location. And we supply our own water and electricity!



Whether you are at home or at work, all you have to do is supply the vehicle. Then just sit back and relax (or continue back to work). Reflection Perfection caters to YOU!



At Reflection Perfection we focus on:



1- Customer Service

2- Convenience

3- Providing the best possible car care experience



Our mission is to provide top notch customer service from the minute we answer the phone to the time we are shaking hands over looking your beautiful detailed vehicle. We promise that when you choose the convenient, total car care experience of Reflection Perfection, you will not be disappointed.



With that being said, please give us a call at (845) 416-7383



We offer weekly, bi weekly and monthly car washing and detailing packages. We use only the best products and equipment in the industry. And everything is safe for the environment.



Serving Westchester, Dutchess, Putnam and Fairfield



Give us a call today at (845) 416-7383
 
Looks good , it's quick to load and easy to navigate around . I think your logo is kool :xyxthumbs Good job .
 
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