Another "Critique my site" thread

[Mack]

Hello fellow Autopians, hope this thread finds everyone doing well. I am in the process of updating my website. I would like some constructive criticism. What looks good, what needs to go. I know I do need a gallery(a real gallery page). Does anyone have any specific keywords they have had success with?

Thanks again,

Marcus

Dallas Ft Worth Metro Auto, Car Detailing by Ultimate Reflections

 

[mrclean81]

Im not expert in websites, but I think it looks good. Some might question your pricing, but your pretty close to mine. Some guys can charge more, some cant. It all comes down to your location. I also like the idea of add ons. I just read an article in Detailers Digest about add ons entitled "4 ways to make $40 or more on every detail". Got me to thinking about doing that as well. I also charge the same as you for 3rd row seating. Id say it looks good overall.

 

[GearHead_1]

Carlots (car lots) is two words.

 

[RTexasF]

"About Us" page. Incorrect spelling.....should be sacrificing not sacraficing

 

[Merlin]

IMHO
The scrolling should be much slower. That'll "class it up" a bit.
Reduce the copy (text/words) on your homepage (Folks don't like to read) Keep it short.
Use all the same size/type font on all the pages. Keep it uniform and simple.
Don't "center" the text on the Services.htm page use left justify. Easier for folks to read.

You asked so there are my thoughts to get ya' started...

 

[XxBoostinxX]

I just read an article in Detailers Digest about add ons entitled "4 ways to make $40 or more on every detail".

You wouldn't happen to have a link to this would you?


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[mrclean81]

This is about as good as I can do from my phone.
Detailers Digest, an award winning publication only for Detail Professionals

 

[Mr. Gloss]

IMHO
The scrolling should be much slower. That'll "class it up" a bit.
Reduce the copy (text/words) on your homepage (Folks don't like to read) Keep it short.
Use all the same size/type font on all the pages. Keep it uniform and simple.
Don't "center" the text on the Services.htm page use left justify. Easier for folks to read.

You asked so there are my thoughts to get ya' started...

Good tips!

IMO websites should be simple and easy to navigate. Here's a local guy with a classy site, very easy to navigate. A very simple front page with tabs to get you where you want to go.

HOME - Dynamic Detail

 

[Todd@RUPES]

Didn't have much time to look through it completely but it looked good on the surface.