Advice on my CL ad?

[JBs]

i posted a couple funny ads a few threads down, and now that i think i am going to put an ad up on craigslist, i want it to look a little more professional.



please tell me what you think of this ad (5 mins of copy/pasting from the site)

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[Thomas Dekany]

I love it!



Like the pictures as well.

 

[tod071]

Looks great. Wish I could design something like for my CL ad. Very nice!

 

[AppliedColors]

Looks great, but some before pics would help.



By the way, CL might start blocking a .jpg that big.

 

[gtpaul]

font is too small, i had to squint to read it.



looks good otherwise

 

[ron231]

Lookin good except a few things



As stated above, the font needs to be a bit bigger.

Your leather conditioning price is a bit high, offer regular leather conditioner for 20, and ultra premium for 40.

Your Super Wash needs to be reworked, do you really want to do all that for only $80?

Also, do you own an extractor? If you do, make sure you mention that in your form because a lot of cheap detailers do not have one and simply leave the soapy solution in the carpet after blotting it dry.

 

[Chris@Optimum]

I really like the layout. Wording is all good. The font...ditto, maybe a little lighter blue background would make it an easier read. With that much info, maybe put a brief, abbreviated description for ppl who lose interest ez with all the details smaller underneath. JMHO. I am putting mine together now too so I will want you guys to look at mine B4 long.



Merry Christmas